Friday, September 9, 2011

E block--Danielle on 288

Danielle Balanov

                                                                                288; Personalized.

            Like so many of Emily Dickinson’s majestically beautiful poems, 288 develops deeper ideas and meanings than just the words on the page. In this instance, the poem speaks to the notions of seclusion and keeping to oneself, which compare very similarly to feelings felt on the very first days of school.  In the poem 288, references and meanings in the poem relate to and remind the reader of their first days of school by exemplifying making friends, staying out of the social limelight, and maintaining a reputation. While the poem itself was clearly not meant to be written about school, it portrays the same sort of social environment and situations that can be found at school. This poem starts off with Dickinson referring to herself as a ‘Nobody’. She writes, “I’m Nobody! Who are you? Are you- Nobody- too?”. This first line mirrors ones introduction to others. The dashes in the wording paints a feeling of uncertainty which is often felt when meeting new people. This uncertainty exemplifies the fear of being shut down or rejected as one might be when dealing with new groups of people, so much like in school. These lines can be interpreted as the very first greeting and the very first conversation you may have in school. It’s a chance to speak about yourself, because prior to an introduction, a person might as well be a nobody. As well as this concept of introduction and opening oneself up to others, this poem also speaks to the social limelight in school. It generally speaks of its negative impacts and the fact that the social mainstream is not somewhere one would want to be. When Dickinson writes, “Then there’s a pair of us? Don’t tell! They’d advertise- you know”, she’s speaking right to this notion. When someone has finally found a legitimate friend in school, you should be eager to get out of the middle of any sort of gossip. “They’d advertise”, is so directly relative to idle gossip and the idea that everyone knows everything about everyone else. Dickinson wants to maintain some sort of secrecy about her life, away from scandalous chitchat. Saying “Don’t tell!” indicates how much she doesn’t want even a little sliver of her personal life to get out in public, even if it’s as small as finding another Nobody. Finally, Dickinson’s poem relates to the connections of school in terms of maintaining a reputation. She writes about those who are “Somebody”. She writes about how public and engorged in reputation people can be. Dickinson writes, “How Dreary – to be- Somebody! How public- like a Frog, To tell one’s name- the livelong June- To an admiring bog!” as her last stanza. In this text, the Frogs, croaking and loud and the least bit reserved represent the somebodies. The people who are somebody have no desire to hold back. In school, these somebodies can be found at the top of the social chain. They are people who are submersed in their egos and statuses. “How public”, she says; so open without the littlest interest in privacy. Dickinson does not seem to understand how people like this can be. In school, there are those exact types of people with no interest or intention of keeping a private life. The croaking frogs drown in their bogs of idle gossip. Overall, Dickinson’s poem establishes a pretty insecure and low-key vibe. She doesn’t want to be well-known or talked about; she’s alright being a Nobody. This poem mirrors and reflects experiences in school that present the same type of message that Dickinson is trying to convey. From making friends and maintaining a reputation, Nobodies are Nobodies, whether it’s in school or written by Emily Dickinson.

7 comments:

  1. John David Nurme

    I liked this essay a lot due to the fact that it makes a connection that most of us, as students, can relate to. I hadn't thought while reading this poem that it accurately asses different social groups in schools. I found this idea particularly interesting due to the fact that I am a Junior Mentor this year,and am dealing with people who consider themselves to be "nobody's" in the school (this was definitely not meant as an insult in any way). Also, I liked how Danielle addressed the idea of reputation, and how "engorged" a reputation can be. Overall i thought this essay was very well written and made an interesting connection that between student and poem.

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  2. I like this essay because it relates to what almost all of us feel when we arrive someplace new. I myself am feeling a connection to this poem since I'm new to the school and to the USA. I also like Danielle's observation that in a school there is a separation between those who want to be "popular" and those who keep to themselves. Very well written.

    -Keinan Poradosu

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  3. Colby said...

    I really like how this paper is structured; it makes the argument easy to follow, assuming that there were logical paragraph breaks in the original document (If not, I suggest paragraphs… I like them). The relatable subject also gives an easy way in which to view a poem that could potentially muddle the argument in complexities. Specifically, how Danielle described what she was going to prove before providing the example and explanation gave clarity before diving into specifics. Also, the sub-ideas seemed to have a close and apparent link to the main idea which further clarifies the argument.

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  4. Corey

    I liked this essay mainly because of its theme and relevance to life as a student, which obviously everyone in class can relate to. You did a great job of showing the inter-workings of social hierarchy at high schools and your point of how normally the top of the social hierarchy are people who do not care for keeping their private lives private. But what really makes this essay so great is your ability to translate thoughts and interesting ideas about the poem and high school life onto paper so seamlessly. Great job Danielle!

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  5. Jared Videlefsky

    I like this essay because it pays close attention to the text and finds meaning in the poem that everyone can relate to. This essay thoroughly ties how students feel on their first day of school to Emily Dickinson's poem. Your essay is also well structured, making it easy to follow and understand your ideas. In all, this essay was very interesting to read and had good vocabulary. Nice Job.

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  6. this essay is well written and very insightful as to how Dickinson may have felt in writing the poem. I loved the ideas in the sentence explaining the meaning of the dashes, i hadn't seen much deeper meaning other than just pauses in reading it. The essay exemplifies how nerve-wracking meeting new people can be, especially in an unfamiliar environment. The part explaining "they'd advertise it" also painted a very clear picture of what Dickinson may have been trying to say
    - Mike W

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  7. This essay has a great structure. The third sentence outlines exactly what the paper is going to cover: making friends, staying out of the limelight and maintaining a reputation. This lets the reader know what to look for and presents the essential connection between Dickinson and the writer's personal experience. The essay shows a mastery of vocabulary and articulates the points clearly by referencing specific lines in the text, thus making a stronger argument. I especially liked the connection between the croaking frogs of June and the idle gossip of school (I agree!). Punctuation was also analyzed, making the paper diverse and not repetitive. Nice job, Danielle!
    -Anna Parkhurst

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